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Commission: Sith Lady II

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A character design done for client's Star Wars fan fiction :) (Smile)
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2105x3508px 1.08 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

So this painting is absulutely gorgeous, and with that said and appreciated i want to go into the critique:
The lighting is a bit off.
A lightsaber is made out of pure light, and should be one of the main lightsources in the area. the background is too dark for the light enviornment the character is painted in. Theres also a light coming form top down, which would mean that her right leg would be in shadow.
It would be nice to see some red reflections on the whole character, maybe throw in a secondary lightsource as a contrast to the light of the saber.

Didn't want to bash your lights lol, i think this piece is really well executed.

Hope you like my Critique!